DjaroGamesYT's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NEW Super Mario Bloopers | Level UP]

nice

LevelUPAnimations responds:

Many thanks! :D

[Play Freezer Burn]

I played the game, it is good but the iceblocks fall on top of each other and very fast, and the lava comes after the 3th block but usually I haven't got a chance to jump on a block.

ATAYLOR28 responds:

Yeah it is definitely difficult. I'm not sure if I made it clear but you can climb on the side of blocks. THANKS for the input, I you are probably right that I need to check up the difficulty.

[The 3 Little Bastards]

It is good, but there are some things that could be better. Search for real voice actors, it will make your animation better. And at the beginning are some loops. If you draw them frame bh frame it will take a lot of time, but it will give you higher ratings. I really liked it. Keep animating, you are very good at it.

studiodenny responds:

thank you, yeah this is all part of the learning process for me, i wanted to stay away from dialogue for now so i can focus just on the animation so im not trying to learn too many things at one go. however, voice acting is one of my goals on my next toon. im also gonna switch to moho 12 so the fluidity and consistency is better. im glad you enjoyed it.

[The Deadly Duel]

4/5, because I really liked it. I could go complain about the graphics, but the simplicity makes it even better. The only thing I would suggest is making it quicker. Make them swing theor aword faster, Let them throw 5 knives instead of 3 at 0:50, but it takes the same time for the whote one to block them. It would make it really cool. In this type of animations, speed is key.

Arhunis responds:

Thank you for you opinion and criticism, I will try to get into the details next time.

[Lake Kraken Animator V.S. Animation Pt. 2]

4.5 / 5
I really like this original concept of mixing real life with animations, and the backflip was really cool. If the Kraken animation's framerate was higher, I would've given you solid 5/5. Keep making these animations, it has really much potential.

Djaro

Eggmanslim responds:

Thanks, Im part of the Tricking community and i figured everyone goes for the hardest tricks but nobody tries to have fun with the fat that they can trick. so i decided to go about it this way! Hopefully it catches on and people really enjoy it! I was definitely trying to think of an original idea. so thank you so much for the feedback!

[Adam & Steve's Prehistoric Adventures - Pilot Episode]

I usually vote very high, but this is too bad. You have decent animating skills, I would suggest making animations with clear lines and color, cartoony. Keep making animations, but make it in another style. You could become a very good animator.

Sumerias1 responds:

Thanks for the critique! Yeah, this was my first attempt at hand drawing my own images. I wanted it to have a raw lines on paper look, but it came out nearly unwatchable since the lines blend together so much. It's a shame. A lot of work went into this, but it had a flawed design. I have 3 episodes altogether. The second once has some design improvements, but they're too subtle to really make a difference. For episode 3, I studied up on editing and scriptwriting and made the episode full color. The color really makes everything pop and the plot and characters develop a bit. I think what I need to do, if I continue this series (I originally wanted 13 episodes) is to remake the 1st two episodes. Episode 3 really shines and I'd like the 1st two eps to work as well as it does. I thing there's a neat series here, but I don't think too many people would keep watching after the 1st two episodes. Thanks again for your opinion :)

[Apple Picking.]

I laughed way too hard at this :)

tonyfamous responds:

Did you laugh so hard applesauce shot out of your nose? ;-)

[hero and pet speed painting (Draw With Jazza comp)]

Good work, but the music is too loud. I recommend using slower and more relaxing music, and make the framerate higher. But you are very talented at drawing. I can't draw a simple stickman. 4 stars because you are so good, if the video improved I would've given this a 5.

joshboy101 responds:

yeah i have no idea why the framerate is so terrible. not sure what i did wrong in the editting. thankyou so much