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Only 3 stars because of the patreon request. You have very much potential, but you need to invest more time in this. Don't use loops, draw every frame. I know it takes much time, but it will make the animation ten times better. Don't ask us too donate at the beginning of the video, make your content so good people want to donate. I would also suggest making your animations a little bit longer. Keep making animations, I realy like them.

4/5, because I really liked it. I could go complain about the graphics, but the simplicity makes it even better. The only thing I would suggest is making it quicker. Make them swing theor aword faster, Let them throw 5 knives instead of 3 at 0:50, but it takes the same time for the whote one to block them. It would make it really cool. In this type of animations, speed is key.

Arhunis responds:

Thank you for you opinion and criticism, I will try to get into the details next time.

4.5 / 5
I really like this original concept of mixing real life with animations, and the backflip was really cool. If the Kraken animation's framerate was higher, I would've given you solid 5/5. Keep making these animations, it has really much potential.

Djaro

Eggmanslim responds:

Thanks, Im part of the Tricking community and i figured everyone goes for the hardest tricks but nobody tries to have fun with the fat that they can trick. so i decided to go about it this way! Hopefully it catches on and people really enjoy it! I was definitely trying to think of an original idea. so thank you so much for the feedback!

You are very good at animating, I think you can become really famous if you make longer animations with a story. It would be really good. Keep up the great work, I'd like to see more.

I usually vote very high, but this is too bad. You have decent animating skills, I would suggest making animations with clear lines and color, cartoony. Keep making animations, but make it in another style. You could become a very good animator.

Sumerias1 responds:

Thanks for the critique! Yeah, this was my first attempt at hand drawing my own images. I wanted it to have a raw lines on paper look, but it came out nearly unwatchable since the lines blend together so much. It's a shame. A lot of work went into this, but it had a flawed design. I have 3 episodes altogether. The second once has some design improvements, but they're too subtle to really make a difference. For episode 3, I studied up on editing and scriptwriting and made the episode full color. The color really makes everything pop and the plot and characters develop a bit. I think what I need to do, if I continue this series (I originally wanted 13 episodes) is to remake the 1st two episodes. Episode 3 really shines and I'd like the 1st two eps to work as well as it does. I thing there's a neat series here, but I don't think too many people would keep watching after the 1st two episodes. Thanks again for your opinion :)

I like this random shit

I laughed way too hard at this :)

tonyfamous responds:

Did you laugh so hard applesauce shot out of your nose? ;-)

Good work, but the music is too loud. I recommend using slower and more relaxing music, and make the framerate higher. But you are very talented at drawing. I can't draw a simple stickman. 4 stars because you are so good, if the video improved I would've given this a 5.

joshboy101 responds:

yeah i have no idea why the framerate is so terrible. not sure what i did wrong in the editting. thankyou so much

This is a very good animation. At some moments I would've chosen another camera angel. One of this moments was the part where you see the hand from very close, I personally would zoom out a little bit. Very good work!

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